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Steel Crow Saga by Paul Krueger
3.0

+This story has an interesting fantasy element that is very much anime inspired.
+There is a lot of LBGTQ representation.
+The growth arc of characters is there and I am thankful for it.

-The world at the beginning is little confusing to keep straight in terms of who invaded who first, who then invaded and why everyone evaded everyone.
-Some of the writing is out of place. There is a chapter where Jimuro is walking and the line is 'walking sucked'. The language just did not fit the narrative.
-Both the romances felt a little forced.
Spoiler Lee and Xiulan's moved very fast and Jimuro's and Tala's had so much potential but ended up feeling forced.