_aprilg_ 's review for:

The Reader by Traci Chee
3.0

The story starts off very slow for me, with a lot of repetitive thoughts. Then it got a little (maybe a lot?) confusing towards the middle. There were different plot lines and for a while, they seem disconnected. These points didn't start converging up until chapter 20+, so there's really a lot of questions opening up in my mind. It's a good thing I buddy-read this with a couple of my friends so I had people to bounce theories off with. Otherwise, I'd probably go crazy and/or DNF-ed this. But it's a good thing I pushed through. There's this whole mystery within the entire book, and I won't spoil you by detailing a little bit more. The beauty of it is in discovering what the whole mystery is about. There's room for improvement in the storytelling/writing style. I understand the intention, but I felt it would have been more effective had it been written a different way. It would have been less confusing too.

There were also a lot of characters. Plus, there were nicknames going around (as some of the characters are pirates) so it was hard to keep track who's who. The difficulty with a story having so many named characters is how to give focus on each of these characters so no one gets left out. But I fear it's one of the pitfalls of this novel. Even the leads don't have much to go on. We just know Sefia has abilities and we know she has a goal to rescue Aunt Nin. But we don't see much dimension to her character, only the repetitive chant on the symbol written on the book. Archer would have been a much more interesting character, had we known more about him. Sadly, we just know he's a fighter and that he's prophesied to do something. Though, it was interesting how that big violent brute of a boy/man show vulnerability (kinda like The Hulk in some ways), so that was good. I also wished Captain Reed was more pirate-y. I mean, he lacked certain swag and arrogance (or even humor) from stereotype pirates (Jack Sparrow anyone?) so that was a bit of a letdown. But I find it so enjoyable reading about his swashbuckling adventures.

If you read this and you suddenly get confused, push through it - everything will be explained in due time.
SpoilerThough the part about Serakeen being a hoax was disappointing. And the confrontation at the end was over too fast. I was expecting a fight!
If you look closer (as the prologue mentions), you'd see hints every now and then. If you can, try and take notes while reading, I wished I did. Also, you'll be able to form a few sentences with the words written on the page numbers, keep a look out on that.