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A review by cyrille6k
The Magician's Secret by Charles Townsend
2.0
Well...
So, the copy I received to read and leave a free review was awful. It was riddled with grammar mistakes and many typos. Many words were mixing letters, or weren't even the right word for the context.
The story was too choppy, and this is didn't make sense. Characters attitudes and characteristics would change on a whim without explain.
Many story parts went along too easily or without a hitch where things should've been much harder. The main character seemed to not be fully engaged in his adventure and would rather sleep the night off with random girls. At the end everything was straight forward and a glorious happy ending and things were wrapped up with a pretty bow, without touching base on many things the story built up to. Things were simply just ended without explanation of where they come from or why they were actually there.
This story could have been good. It has the potential. It was just not executed well. It felt like I was reading someone's rough draft and not a published book as I was expecting. I quite enjoyed some of the concepts this book introduced and it is disappointing to see the glory fall so flat.
So, the copy I received to read and leave a free review was awful. It was riddled with grammar mistakes and many typos. Many words were mixing letters, or weren't even the right word for the context.
The story was too choppy, and this is didn't make sense. Characters attitudes and characteristics would change on a whim without explain.
Many story parts went along too easily or without a hitch where things should've been much harder. The main character seemed to not be fully engaged in his adventure and would rather sleep the night off with random girls. At the end everything was straight forward and a glorious happy ending and things were wrapped up with a pretty bow, without touching base on many things the story built up to. Things were simply just ended without explanation of where they come from or why they were actually there.
This story could have been good. It has the potential. It was just not executed well. It felt like I was reading someone's rough draft and not a published book as I was expecting. I quite enjoyed some of the concepts this book introduced and it is disappointing to see the glory fall so flat.