A review by starryeved
Yesterday I Was the Moon by Noor Unnahar

2.0

"i have been a sky all my life
full of life and light and anger
if you're not coming with thunderstorms; do not
come
at all"


Well, while still mediocre, definitely better than R.H. Sin. A number of these poems were decent, as were a number of the illustrations (which are always a bonus in modern poetry). However, again: simple is not always better.

In addition, the number of human-building metaphors is astounding. Is that a new fad? If so, I cringe, hard.