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A review by terriaminute
Bad, Dad, and Dangerous by Jenn Moffatt, Rhys Ford, Bru Baker
lighthearted
medium-paced
3.0
tl:dr: two out of four, a better average than most collections I've tried.
'Monster Hall Pass,' by Bru Baker, is pretty good. It needed a better edit.
'Kismet and Cadavers,' by Jenn Moffatt. This felt disjointed to me. Part was the two POVs were hard to tell apart for over half the story. Part was interweaving of one character talking while the POV character thought things, same paragraph. And, there were odd time skips. Needed work.
'Elf Shot,' by TA Moore. Awful title, rich world, engaging characters. Best story so far.
'Wolf at First Sight,' by Rhys Ford. Well. I got close to the end, but only by skimming, and then I gave up. Very wordy, nothing unique, lots of repetition. Definitely the worst of this author I've read.
'Monster Hall Pass,' by Bru Baker, is pretty good. It needed a better edit.
'Kismet and Cadavers,' by Jenn Moffatt. This felt disjointed to me. Part was the two POVs were hard to tell apart for over half the story. Part was interweaving of one character talking while the POV character thought things, same paragraph. And, there were odd time skips. Needed work.
'Elf Shot,' by TA Moore. Awful title, rich world, engaging characters. Best story so far.
'Wolf at First Sight,' by Rhys Ford. Well. I got close to the end, but only by skimming, and then I gave up. Very wordy, nothing unique, lots of repetition. Definitely the worst of this author I've read.