A review by cammiico
Malice by Heather Walter

adventurous dark emotional hopeful sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5


When I started the book I really thought this was going to be my next all time favorite book. It was written in a style I don't typically like, short and not very descriptive. I tend to enjoy a lot of inner thoughts and descriptors when reading first person, but Heather Walter's does a very great job at painting a picture with very little. However that I'd also part of this books downfall near the end.

The retelling is great, I loved reading about Alyce and the lore Heather created around the fairies in the original was a very unique spin. Though it took me some time to understand what was the name of a person, place, or title. 

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I might be a bit nit picky but my biggest issue is that the true love aspect in my opinion isn't shown very well. To me Alyce sounds more infatuated. She is introduced as admiring Leythana and when she sees that same drive and desire to rule kindly in Aurora she latches on to it. To me it felt like Alyce was more in love with the idea of Aurora and how she perceived her than with Aurora herself. 

I also didn't see that love reciprocated by Aurora. I get this is written in first person but there's ways to write characters motivations or expressions so the reader can get the idea or infer from context clue. Alyce is written admiring Aurora's beauty and her desire to change the Grace Laws that we never actually see Aurora's expressions very much. Only when Alyce lashes out do we get to see Aurora's features reflecting any kind of emotion.

I just found myself wishing that there was a little bit more with each chapter. It's a great retelling, I did enjoy it for the most part but I just wish that we got to see the two come together a bit more naturally. It felt oddly rushed despite happening only at the last handful of chapters. I also HATE when we get that "finally" moment and it's immediately taken away. Let readers enjoy it for longer than one chapter. Especially when that chapter is only a few short pages.

Overall I did enjoy the book. It was imaginative and a very inspired way if creating lore. But ultimately I found myself wanting just a little bit more from the scenery and the interactions. I shouldn't be able to understand and see clearly the tension and pull between Alyice and her main tormentor Rose MORE than Alyce and her main love interest.
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