A review by offictionandfantasy
The Forever Watch by David B. Ramirez

2.0

I was given this book over half a decade ago and finally got around to reading it for Book Battle’s Star on the Cover prompt this month.

The author is a former scientist and it is very evident by how this book is written. I felt as though most of the 326 pages were in depth descriptions of computer programs with the occasional brief (and vague) paragraph for battle or sex.

I didn’t connect with any of the characters throughout the entire series. I didn’t like the romance in the slightest. There were at least ten grammatical errors or duplicate words that threw me from the story.

I’m only giving this book two stars because I genuinely didn’t guess the final plot twist. Don’t get me wrong, I still threw the book across the room when I was done, but at least I didn’t see it coming.