charlievivica 's review for:

I Feed Her to the Beast and the Beast Is Me by Jamison Shea

DID NOT FINISH: 48%

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I really struggled with the pacing with this one. There were some moments that I felt were adequately paced and so many unimportant scenes that were so drawn out. This was especially frustrating when there were incredibly important or intense scenes and instead those felt really anticlimactic. I really wish we got more of her exploring the catacombs and a build up to her selling her soul to the deities and I wish there was more showing and less telling when it came to the exposition and world building.