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Spiral by Bal Khabra
3.0

I didn't like how pushy Sage was at the beginning. Especially since he was dealing w other pushy females. When she barged into the locker room then proceeded to stare at him half naked, it made me cringe a little. I just felt like it wasn't a recipe leading to him falling for her.

I liked the story but I think I liked Collide more.