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A review by charlottenw1
Make Me Forget by Kennedy Fox
3.0
This story became more tolerable as it went on.
From the get-go of Vada arriving at this quaint holiday home where she can clear her mind of all the background noise, Ethan is cracking out the sexual innuendos. Not in a smooth way either, it's all very cringe and Vada jumps on them all very dramatically.
It was nice to see Ethan peel back the layers of his grumpy personality and see why he has turned into this unsociable human being. Vada sought her way into all his cracks and he let her into some of his most precious memories. I preferred Ethan's back story to Vada's as it felt more established to the storyline itself whereas Vada's was put in their later on in the story.
As the story progressed there were times where it felt rushed as Vada started referring to a chunk of their relationship in past tense, which was their main conflict and resolution stage. I would have liked to have been more involved in this stage as a reader.
From the get-go of Vada arriving at this quaint holiday home where she can clear her mind of all the background noise, Ethan is cracking out the sexual innuendos. Not in a smooth way either, it's all very cringe and Vada jumps on them all very dramatically.
It was nice to see Ethan peel back the layers of his grumpy personality and see why he has turned into this unsociable human being. Vada sought her way into all his cracks and he let her into some of his most precious memories. I preferred Ethan's back story to Vada's as it felt more established to the storyline itself whereas Vada's was put in their later on in the story.
As the story progressed there were times where it felt rushed as Vada started referring to a chunk of their relationship in past tense, which was their main conflict and resolution stage. I would have liked to have been more involved in this stage as a reader.