ladymreads 's review for:

The Make Out Artist by Sara Ney

4.0

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My review may not sound the best, but I did overall enjoy the story. I'm hoping that some of the bugs have been worked out since I read an early copy. There were some mistakes. Then some sloppy wording I guess. Like Eli and Molly were sitting together and the description was so confusing, I couldn't figure out how they were sitting. Then there was the flashback repeating of lines. Here and there is fine, I get it, but there was a lot. Like when a show comes back from commercial and recaps what they already aired, like to remind you, even though you just watched it. So much italics repeat, I ended up skimming. Like it was filler to hit a word count. Then Molly was great, until she let me down in the 1st sex scene. She did not come across well to me. Kind of immature, kind of selfish, I didn't like it. Then the scene with Eli and Laura, it seemed like we missed it all, and then got parts of it in recap. It kind of had a weird flow. See, it sounds bad, but I did enjoy it and will read the next book in the series.