A review by rosebudthom
Pack of Strays by Dana Cameron

2.0

Very busy! A lot isn't described properly and is left to the imagination, then se refers to a certain part which was left up to your imagination - as if you were expected to just know how it looked. This happens several times and confused me, but I pushed on. The story is good - great, even. It needs an edit (I see this is only the first publication so understandable) and better descriptions, as it isn't clear whether some things are dream, reality, or places in Zoe's head.