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Pride and Premeditation
by Steffanie Holmes
Basically a copy/paste of my review on books#1-2. I like the story. I like the characters. I like the premise. I'm going to continue the series. I just wish the writing was better.
There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors that absolutely threw me off while reading, which was unpleasant. Decreasing as the series continues, but still annoying.
With every book I read, I'm somehow getting more annoyed with the lack of development of the original plot, but the capacity to add twists. Zero development, infinite complications.
I'm putting the series down for a bit. I'll pick it back up eventually, but I need a break.
Edit: Also what was with Mina & the profuse apologies to her mother? She lied, made Mina feel like a "freak," called her an ungrateful bitch on the way out.....She can't say sorry once, but Mina does it over PAGES. Wtf??? Some characters don't need a redemption arc & just need to be cut out.
There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors that absolutely threw me off while reading, which was unpleasant. Decreasing as the series continues, but still annoying.
With every book I read, I'm somehow getting more annoyed with the lack of development of the original plot, but the capacity to add twists. Zero development, infinite complications.
I'm putting the series down for a bit. I'll pick it back up eventually, but I need a break.
Edit: Also what was with Mina & the profuse apologies to her mother? She lied, made Mina feel like a "freak," called her an ungrateful bitch on the way out.....She can't say sorry once, but Mina does it over PAGES. Wtf??? Some characters don't need a redemption arc & just need to be cut out.