A review by poetry_drive
The Do-Over by T.L. Swan

2.0

I’m disappointed AF with his story and this ending to the Miles brother’s series.

Look… I’m all for character growth and becoming a less pretentious person, but I didn’t feel that he really learned that much. I was hoping that he would spend more time in Hayden’s world and humble a bit more.

However, I absolutely enjoyed Eddie and that dynamic. That was sweet and I felt it was well within the MMC’s character to do it. If anything, the MMC’s relationship with Eddie was the only thing that felt truly kind and organic.

This FMC is my least fucking fave and that’s saying a lot because Emily wasn’t great. She didn’t hold out, the angst was dismal, and she’s not very stubborn. In the end, she caved on her wants and emotions, only to find out that the MMC “conveniently” decided to meet them while separated.

Spice: 3/5 it was good but my annoyance at the characters pissed me off