thefantaysbookdragon 's review for:

The Swan Harp by Elizabeth Creith
3.0

Thank you to the author & publisher via NetGalley for the ARC copy of this book in exchange for my honest opinion.

This YA fantasy, featuring shapeshifting magic, medieval settings, and a captivating cover, blends the elegance of "The Swan Harp" with the coming-of-age essence of "East" by Edith Pattou. Set in the kingdom of Valenia, the tale follows Princess Kiar, part human and part swanfolk, as she navigates the complexities of her lineage and destiny.

Initially, the narrative unfolds at a gentle pace, allowing for the gradual development of Kiar and her companions. While the characters lack uniqueness, a deeper exploration of their emotions and actions could enhance their depth. Despite some repetitive language and grammatical errors, the story captivates with its enchanting world and magical elements.

As the plot unfolds, political intrigue and romantic entanglements propel the story forward, leading to a crescendo of action in the latter half. Although Kiar's decisions may frustrate at times, her journey resonates with authenticity and relatability.

Overall, while the premise holds promise, the execution falls short due to pacing issues. With adjustments, this well-crafted novel has the potential to shine, earning it a solid recommendation for fans of YA fantasy.