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The Templar Concordat by Terrence O'Brien
1.0

After only a day of reading I had to put it down. It started off promising but quickly went downhill from there. What distracted me the most was the inane conversations between many of the characters not to mention the over description down to the minute detail. So glad I only borrowed it as opposed to spending any amount of money on it. With some fine tuning & deleting of large portions of conversation where the same thing was said over & over again using different words would go a long way in making me care about reading any further.