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joreadsalot 's review for:
A Ruin of Roses
by K.F. Breene
I wonder if this book has been properly edited by someone else besides the author? There was so much potential to the story, but the world building made it all confusing AF:
- when is this happening? there's a mention of electricity, but then women are not meant to hunt and they need to take a husband and have children
- the prince wearing jeans? the term was coined in 1795, so what does this mean???
- nice use of the incubus concept, but what did the demons do other than that?
- so much talk about the evil king, yet no appearance?
It got slightly better towards the end of the book, but still very sub-par.
- when is this happening? there's a mention of electricity, but then women are not meant to hunt and they need to take a husband and have children
- the prince wearing jeans? the term was coined in 1795, so what does this mean???
- nice use of the incubus concept, but what did the demons do other than that?
- so much talk about the evil king, yet no appearance?
It got slightly better towards the end of the book, but still very sub-par.