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The Red Fox Clan by John Flanagan
3.0
adventurous slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

the pacing is really off, i dont see a reason to spread this story out across two books. i feel like a lot of characters became less developed then they had been in previous books, gilan lost a lot of his traits but the female characters (especially evanlyn) suffered the most. john flanagan learn to write women challenge