saraubs 's review for:

2.0

I've been sitting around for a couple of days now, thinking (and thinking, and thinking) about how to review this book. In all honesty, I've been truly torn, as I'm not sure that the 2 stars I've settled on will give an accurate representation of what this book is really like. That being said, I don't think I can fairly assign a higher rating, as I am certain I would have stopped reading about a quarter of the way through if this hadn't been our book club's January selection.

Overall, the experience of reading this book was quite poor; there were entire sections that I had to SLOG through, and despite the harrowing circumstances of the characters, I found myself frequently bored. The writing, while not bad, was overly inclusive, repetitive, and could have used a thorough edit.

The real shame is that hidden within these overwritten chunks there are some wickedly funny and deeply profound passages. Coles has a firm grip on the intergenerational trauma that affects outport Newfoundlanders, and she's able to examine it without judgement, which I believe takes true skill. Her appreciation for how relationships grow (and/or fester) and her grasp of the complex psychosocial circumstances that make people act in seemingly incomprehensible ways are particularly impressive. I would love to read some of her short fiction, as I wonder if that medium would help highlight her strengths without falling victim to the same narrative dumping that dragged this novel down.