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A review by jessi_readss
Make You Mine by Laura Pavlov
2.0
Let me start this review by saying I highly enjoyed the first two books, so my rating was unexpected for this one.
What I liked about this book:
- the characters
- the ending
What I didn’t like:
- everything else.
First off, there were way too many poop and fart scenes. Because there were kids in this one as the mmc is a single dad. But so what, we write a book with kids and we have to have one run around with a “turd” coming out of her “booty”, and another that has to fully undress to use the potty. And this had to be conveyed to us why? 🤮 immediate icks but I continued on because again, I loved the first two books so I had hope that this one would get better. It didn’t.
I never ever thought the word “panties” could be over used, but here we are. And the custody scenes were so unrealistic, if you’re going to write a book with custody in it, maybe do research about it first. 😅 I have been in that system and none of what was happening would have happened in a real custody battle where the mother already “signed away her rights”. So that irked me and pulled me out of the story.
The insta love was also cringe and corny. They fought said attraction for all of 4 or 5 chapters and then they’re talking about masturbation together? Wtaf.
So yeah, while I love the characters, this book will be skipped if I ever reread this series. I will still be continuing the series for now.
What I liked about this book:
- the characters
- the ending
What I didn’t like:
- everything else.
First off, there were way too many poop and fart scenes. Because there were kids in this one as the mmc is a single dad. But so what, we write a book with kids and we have to have one run around with a “turd” coming out of her “booty”, and another that has to fully undress to use the potty. And this had to be conveyed to us why? 🤮 immediate icks but I continued on because again, I loved the first two books so I had hope that this one would get better. It didn’t.
I never ever thought the word “panties” could be over used, but here we are. And the custody scenes were so unrealistic, if you’re going to write a book with custody in it, maybe do research about it first. 😅 I have been in that system and none of what was happening would have happened in a real custody battle where the mother already “signed away her rights”. So that irked me and pulled me out of the story.
The insta love was also cringe and corny. They fought said attraction for all of 4 or 5 chapters and then they’re talking about masturbation together? Wtaf.
So yeah, while I love the characters, this book will be skipped if I ever reread this series. I will still be continuing the series for now.