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marleyshelves 's review for:
Forget Me Not
by Karissa Kinword
Rogue Space pirate. Galactic travel. Smut. Idk, do you need any further information?
This wasn’t perfect, but I was so down for the epic meeting of these two people that only know each other from their dreams. And they come to this meeting on a transport ship in the middle of space. Think Han Solo. Think sci fi fated mates. Think drama and trauma and honestly it gets pretty dark.
My critique of this is that (a) I didn’t need quite so much smut (like I’m tired from reading, dang) and (b) italicized words should be used more sparingly in writing (IMO).
The premise of this is original and could be developed into something wonderful for sure!
This wasn’t perfect, but I was so down for the epic meeting of these two people that only know each other from their dreams. And they come to this meeting on a transport ship in the middle of space. Think Han Solo. Think sci fi fated mates. Think drama and trauma and honestly it gets pretty dark.
My critique of this is that (a) I didn’t need quite so much smut (like I’m tired from reading, dang) and (b) italicized words should be used more sparingly in writing (IMO).
The premise of this is original and could be developed into something wonderful for sure!