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A review by megant713
The Goddess Twins by Yodassa Williams
adventurous
challenging
hopeful
inspiring
tense
medium-paced
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
I really wanted to love this more than I did! The plot was solid, but the dialogue was a bit stilted and not quite natural, and I picked up on one mistake that was missed in editing.
On page 64 Arden is on the top bunk sleeping. On page 76 Aurora then says she gets down from the top bunk, trying not to wake Arden. Then on page 79, Arden is back on the top bunk. (Obviously this is not a major issue and I was able to read around the discrepancy, but this is something that should have been caught along the way.)
I did love the budding relationship between Arden and Devin. If this book becomes a series, I would look forward to reading more about their romance.
On page 64 Arden is on the top bunk sleeping. On page 76 Aurora then says she gets down from the top bunk, trying not to wake Arden. Then on page 79, Arden is back on the top bunk. (Obviously this is not a major issue and I was able to read around the discrepancy, but this is something that should have been caught along the way.)
I did love the budding relationship between Arden and Devin. If this book becomes a series, I would look forward to reading more about their romance.