You need to sign in or sign up before continuing.
Take a photo of a barcode or cover
literarylynz 's review for:
The Last Storm
by J.D. Linton
Not sure where to even begin on this one...
This book lacked context, this book lacked character development, this book lacked tension.. and just as I'm repeating myself so did this book.
If I read he grabbed her chin with his forefinger and thumb one more time I was gonna scream
Everything that should have had build-up or foreshadowing just was a reveal.
A couple of times I just thought I was reading a rough draft.
This book needed more editing.
This book lacked context, this book lacked character development, this book lacked tension.. and just as I'm repeating myself so did this book.
If I read he grabbed her chin with his forefinger and thumb one more time I was gonna scream
Everything that should have had build-up or foreshadowing just was a reveal.
A couple of times I just thought I was reading a rough draft.
This book needed more editing.