A review by schnarah
The Broken Puppet by Amo Jones

2.0

1. The. Geography. Is. Bad.

"“We’re going to New Zealand? Couldn’t you choose a different country, like, I don’t know… Dubai?”
I turn to face her. “And where do you think they’ll look first, Tate?” [...]
“And besides,” I add, “I haven’t even heard of New Zealand. I doubt Bishop has."

"“Have you decided where we’re going next?” [...]
“Mmmm, Milan?”
“Spain?” I ask, shocked."

Yes, I'm shocked aswell. You're telling she's never heard about New Zealand - or Italy?
I'm not sure if it's intentional to portray that whole ignorant American girl image or if they just don't know it.


2. Hector Hayes saying he doesn't condone rape makes no sense considering the initiation process consisting of rape and murder.