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A review by sunnys_library
The Luminaries by Susan Dennard
3.75
What a great story! I really enjoyed this stroyline and main character. The main character was quite nice and readers could feel empathy for her. She was likeable which is a great thing (so many MCs have been very unlikable in other fantasy books I've read).
However, the writing needs some work. The dialogues, the descriptions and the repetitiveness of certain things made it apparent that the writing needs work. Specifically when it came to worldbuilding i did not feel like I was really able to imagine the atmosphete and the creatures.
However, the writing needs some work. The dialogues, the descriptions and the repetitiveness of certain things made it apparent that the writing needs work. Specifically when it came to worldbuilding i did not feel like I was really able to imagine the atmosphete and the creatures.