squeeze1807 's review for:

Unhinged by Onley James
3.0
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Fantastic concept. Terrible writing.

Honestly this writers reminds me of the phrase "throw enough shit and something will stick". The year she published this book she published 6 in total. We need to go for quality not quantity folks.

Because this is a great story!!!! The slightly weird found family, a psychopath who wants to love, the submissive guy who's actually kinda a dom but is learning to be strong. There's so much good stuff in this book it's really such a shame the author was so careless with the execution.

If I could meet the author I would say:
Show don't tell. 
Slow. The. Fuck. Down.
Don't gloss over the big stuff.