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lotto212 's review for:
The House Witch 3
by Delemhach
slow-paced
The story is actually great and has the potential to be so much better, but for me there’s something seriously lacking with this series. It could be the writing style, as it’s a bit toooo amateurish? We don’t need such a play by play of characters actions, especially when it comes to Fin magically closing doors, magically sound proofing rooms etc.
Also didn’t love the weight gain comments - they were unnecessary, distasteful and came across really dated.
I would give this 5 stars if if were better written as I love the general concept of the series, but for me it just drags a bit too much - especially the parts where everyone is ‘howling with laughter’. Hopefully the authors writing style improves as she produces more books!
Also didn’t love the weight gain comments - they were unnecessary, distasteful and came across really dated.
I would give this 5 stars if if were better written as I love the general concept of the series, but for me it just drags a bit too much - especially the parts where everyone is ‘howling with laughter’. Hopefully the authors writing style improves as she produces more books!