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A review by j_j_catcrazydragon
Mates: Posy: Book One by Mary Ann Weir
Did not finish book.
2.5⭐️ DNF 55%
This was a lovely story, and a lovely attempt, that sadly failed utterly.
The dialogue is often stilted, overly formal, and comes across as cringe.
The FMC’s wolfs voice is juvenile, awkward, and somewhat annoying.
As for the details and story development, the author really should have done more research, or consulted with a more knowledgeable source.
I could have forgiven so much, skimmed over, and endured the dialogue issues, but not this as well…too much.
The FMC is abused for approx 6 years, kept imprisoned, and unable to leave the house for this time period (starting somewhere around 12).
When she is rescued and has to leave the house for the first time, she naturally panics and has difficulty.
Disappointingly, this is quickly overcome, followed by the next day, she is able to visit a shopping centre no problem, even able to walk off on her own for a time, without any panic, agoraphobia, or anxiety…
This was a lovely story, and a lovely attempt, that sadly failed utterly.
The dialogue is often stilted, overly formal, and comes across as cringe.
The FMC’s wolfs voice is juvenile, awkward, and somewhat annoying.
As for the details and story development, the author really should have done more research, or consulted with a more knowledgeable source.
I could have forgiven so much, skimmed over, and endured the dialogue issues, but not this as well…too much.
The FMC is abused for approx 6 years, kept imprisoned, and unable to leave the house for this time period (starting somewhere around 12).
When she is rescued and has to leave the house for the first time, she naturally panics and has difficulty.
Disappointingly, this is quickly overcome, followed by the next day, she is able to visit a shopping centre no problem, even able to walk off on her own for a time, without any panic, agoraphobia, or anxiety…