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A review by natalierogers
Before the Storm by Montana Fyre
3.0
I liked it but there were things that got on my nerves about it.
** slight spoilers maybe
Ayvah was very insecure through the whole book and it is constantly talked about. Her family would degrade her and make her feel like she wasn’t good enough. Storm worked with her to make her more confident and stop talking bad about herself.
Now when he was sending her away and decided that the best way to do it was to tear her down over every insecurity she had… yeah I honestly would have had a hard time forgiving that. ESPECIALLY when he barely apologized for it then when she’s saying like leave I can’t do this he’s all “can’t she see I love her? Can’t she see I did this for her? But like can’t he see he did exactly what her family did to her for her entire life…
There were phrases that were said in the book way too many times. I was started to get irritated because I felt like I was reading the same thing over and over again. I still enjoyed the story I just wish that instead of using the same phrases it was switched up.
** slight spoilers maybe
Ayvah was very insecure through the whole book and it is constantly talked about. Her family would degrade her and make her feel like she wasn’t good enough. Storm worked with her to make her more confident and stop talking bad about herself.
Now when he was sending her away and decided that the best way to do it was to tear her down over every insecurity she had… yeah I honestly would have had a hard time forgiving that. ESPECIALLY when he barely apologized for it then when she’s saying like leave I can’t do this he’s all “can’t she see I love her? Can’t she see I did this for her? But like can’t he see he did exactly what her family did to her for her entire life…
There were phrases that were said in the book way too many times. I was started to get irritated because I felt like I was reading the same thing over and over again. I still enjoyed the story I just wish that instead of using the same phrases it was switched up.