A review by vicariousbookstagram
More Than This by Jay McLean

4.0

First part of the book was very fast paced, too much was happening way too fast. It was eyeroll and cringe worthy. Some mannerisms/gestures were repeated to an annoying degree. Then suddenly the book found its pace and developed a ton of heart. The latter half of the book had a lot of sexual tension/teasing and that became a bit much at times- just a bit absurd but almost believable when the reason was given why. The dialog and heart in the 2nd half make up for the poor parts of the book and I actually ended up enjoying it. I have all 5 books so now I will start book 2.