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Blood of Hercules by Jasmine Mas
Did not finish book. Stopped at 16%.
I don't know what in the Wattpad l read, but it was so bad, I couldn't continue.
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I'm convinced this book was written for the attention span of Gen Zers.
Why?
Because of its disjointed writing.
Which, if you haven't read it, is basically Mas abusing the enter key.
To create short sentences like this.
She probably thinks it creates sharp and punchy writing.
It doesn't.
Not to mention her overuse of parentheses (to add extra cutesy thoughts) in the middle of and at the end of sentences (kill me).
I only read 76 pages.
But really, I shouldn't have bothered.
Avoid this book if you appreciate good (and actual) writing.
‘Cos this reads like it was haphazardly put together in a notes app.
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I'm convinced this book was written for the attention span of Gen Zers.
Why?
Because of its disjointed writing.
Which, if you haven't read it, is basically Mas abusing the enter key.
To create short sentences like this.
She probably thinks it creates sharp and punchy writing.
It doesn't.
Not to mention her overuse of parentheses (to add extra cutesy thoughts) in the middle of and at the end of sentences (kill me).
I only read 76 pages.
But really, I shouldn't have bothered.
Avoid this book if you appreciate good (and actual) writing.
‘Cos this reads like it was haphazardly put together in a notes app.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse
Moderate: Violence
Minor: Self harm