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A review by joshhall13
One More Last Time by Eric Ugland
2.0
This one is a weird litrpg book. There's quite a few good to great aspects of the writing. The author is talented!
I can't quite explain why I disliked this book despite the good writing aspects. It feels like maybe the author isn't familiar with rpg games. Or perhaps the publisher rushed the author on this book before it got fully finished. I mean the MC gained spells and talents that are never even used in the book. There was also never any point where the MC was in danger. So I really feel like there is merit to my "unfinished book" theory.
I think people will enjoy this if they want a short YA fantasy, magic read.
I can't quite explain why I disliked this book despite the good writing aspects. It feels like maybe the author isn't familiar with rpg games. Or perhaps the publisher rushed the author on this book before it got fully finished. I mean the MC gained spells and talents that are never even used in the book. There was also never any point where the MC was in danger. So I really feel like there is merit to my "unfinished book" theory.
I think people will enjoy this if they want a short YA fantasy, magic read.