khaleesimod93 's review for:

The Unwanted Wife by L. Steele

1.0

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I was incredibly uncomfortable at how the characters acted and how they responded to each other. Skylar had some serious self esteem issues that Nathan didnt help. While I understood her insecurities, she didnt seem to get more confident as the story went on. Even when Nathan "showed" how he felt. I dont think Nathan ever really cared anyway so it made their relationship less realistic. Some of the things he did especially for her first time was a bit much. I dont believe them as a couple. The story isn't a win in my book. Did seem to have some good potential but not the greatest follow through. Im not sure if I'll try book 2 in this series or another series altogether.