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A review by daisybox
My Broken Crown by Steffanie Holmes
1.0
This series lost me completely.
The characters get lost in the plot too. As much as I like some weird crazy plot, I need some realistic elements and this is not it.
I can't believe the author added Yara. Why? What's her purpose?
I don't understand how they all forgot about Mac as soon as she disappears. Wouldn't finding her their priority? It's mindblowing.
Grammar errors, continuity errors. This series needs a good edit too.
The characters get lost in the plot too. As much as I like some weird crazy plot, I need some realistic elements and this is not it.
I can't believe the author added Yara. Why? What's her purpose?
I don't understand how they all forgot about Mac as soon as she disappears. Wouldn't finding her their priority? It's mindblowing.
Grammar errors, continuity errors. This series needs a good edit too.