ashesandmochi 's review for:

We Can Never Leave This Place by Eric LaRocca

DID NOT FINISH: 3%

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i never do this but like WHAT is UP with these SIMILES. please. i'm begging the editor. vary up the sentence structure, don't use a simile every other sentence. this book sounded extremely my shit but i find myself wishing it had been done with a more deft hand