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Royally Endowed by Emma Chase
3.0

2.5 Stars

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What was this...?? I just got snippets of these two's life for like 57% and then after we finally get to what I think is present day...we keep jumping...one week, two weeks...even months?? I wanted a full fledged story of them but we just got Logan continually pushing her away until he's like "fine.." and then we get about 17% of them together and then..well the rest is predictable.

I was bored because of the lack of fluidity in the storyline. We just get the past which is just so choppy and that stalker was just awful...I felt that Chase put him in for conflict but I felt that the main couple had their own obstacles to overcome that he wasn't needed...

But, I did like what we did get when we were in the "present day." They were funny, endearing and pure cuteness. Also, the writing is still pretty great!