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thirty37seven 's review for:

More Than This by Jay McLean
1.0

The Plot: Guy falls in love with girl, girl falls in love with guy, they can't be together because reasons, then at the end they suddenly can be together because reasons.

I think it's hilarious that sexual tension was building up through the whole book and then when they finally do have sex it's totally glossed over. There's all this description of touching and groping and when they finally get down to it, it's basically "we had all this awesome sex, multiple times, next scene".

This:
"I more than a lot like you."
Shit is repeated "more than a lot", so much in fact that my eyes were rolling right out of my face.

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