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A review by tjlcody
Hotel Ruby by Suzanne Young
5.0
Pretty damn good.
One little nitpicky critique though, writing- wise: When everyone's telling Audrey the story (towards the end of the book) about how they all came to be in the Ruby, the dialogue was just... Like, painfully unrealistic. Like, the author wrote it with the same sort of detail and style you'd use to write narration normally... Except that it was the characters saying it. Which was really awkward, because it sounded nothing like the way a person would actually talk,.
One little nitpicky critique though, writing- wise: When everyone's telling Audrey the story (towards the end of the book) about how they all came to be in the Ruby, the dialogue was just... Like, painfully unrealistic. Like, the author wrote it with the same sort of detail and style you'd use to write narration normally... Except that it was the characters saying it. Which was really awkward, because it sounded nothing like the way a person would actually talk,