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A review by alexisisreading
Off Plan by May Archer
3.0
3.5 stars rounded down
Conflicting feelings because on one hand I loved Fenn and Mason and their bantering and their slow progression from being annoyed at the others presence to desperately wanting the other. I loved how Mason got to explore new dreams with Fenn and I liked how Fenn began to open up to Mason even after everything that he went through.
But for some reason I just didn’t find myself very engaged in the story? It’s a pet peeve of mine when books are like “for the next three weeks we did this…” and then tells you what the characters did. I’d rather just read about it and this book was pretty long so I feel like the page time could have been used better?
Also just a personal ick of mine but I hate nicknames. Every time I read Fenn call Mason “Loafers” I couldn’t help but cringe away.
Love Beale though, gonna continue this series so I can see him get his happy ending because he deserves it!!
Conflicting feelings because on one hand I loved Fenn and Mason and their bantering and their slow progression from being annoyed at the others presence to desperately wanting the other. I loved how Mason got to explore new dreams with Fenn and I liked how Fenn began to open up to Mason even after everything that he went through.
But for some reason I just didn’t find myself very engaged in the story? It’s a pet peeve of mine when books are like “for the next three weeks we did this…” and then tells you what the characters did. I’d rather just read about it and this book was pretty long so I feel like the page time could have been used better?
Also just a personal ick of mine but I hate nicknames. Every time I read Fenn call Mason “Loafers” I couldn’t help but cringe away.
Love Beale though, gonna continue this series so I can see him get his happy ending because he deserves it!!