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Despite It All by Mollie Goins
2.0

2 stars for the kid

How is she so special to him that he spent 5 years looking for her if he had sex with another woman ? He was so infatuated with her on their ONS that he was adamant to find her yet can't keep it in his pants? Would he have died if he stayed celibate while looking for this dream girl of his?
"Because you're it for me, Wy. You always have been. Call me crazy, but one night with you was enough to make me realize I don't want anyone else. I don't give a fuck about missing the past five years as long as I have you back in my life."

Be for fucking real, did he not want the other woman he slept with?
So inconsistent


What is the point of telling us he's never forgotten about her and has been actively looking for her for years but he also dipped his dick elsewhere but that's not the worst part
What's worst is our lovely fmc was celibate too busy being a mom, charming

If he didn't say that he was so insistant to find this girl for years, his lack if celibacy would have been okay because it was just a ONS.

If SHE was allowed to date and also been with other men again it would have been okay. but this consistent double standards that 2nd chance romance authors can't seem to let go of making the fmc celibate while struggling with something needs TO GO

If you're gonna write a man obsessed trope, write it well don't just throw in words and give us opposite actions.

Safety :
No cheating
Omd : her coworker has a thing for her
She has been celibate for 5 years