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Fake It 'Til You Make It by Louisa Masters
2.0
Fake It ‘Til You Make It by Louisa Masters is a short story about Michael, a tech billionaire who has always been a stereotypical geek at heart, and James, the sophisticated older brother of his best friend. James has been the centre of Michael's fantasies from the moment they met, but he doesn’t think those dreams can ever come true. What would James, who’s suave and successful, want with some who’s just faking his way through life?
The ONLY reason that this book has two stars is because it’s short and somewhat funny. Beyond that, I genuinely didn’t enjoy it.
The writing was alright, but often awkward. This book is chock-full of phrases and instances where Michael seems to prove he’s “A Nerd”. From Michael tripping over himself, speaking in gibberish, and having some very odd narrative thoughts about How Different He Is, way too much was done to make this attractive, rich white man seem socially inept.
It was uncomfortable to read because it was so, SO overdone, and I didn’t enjoy it. Two examples that stuck out to me the most are under spoilers:
Beyond that, the plot moves quickly, though fairly well-paced for a story of its length. I enjoyed how Michael and James came together, and the way it was revealed that Michael hadn’t been the only one with a crush. The plot revolving around their family is fun and wholesome, which was enjoyable to read if not very impactful.
I found the ending a bit strange, and the reveal about James… very unnecessary and handled oddly. Still, the book did end on a happy note, which is something I, personally, always like to see.
Overall, this was a fast, easy read that was hindered by its attempt at being different. It isn’t one I’d recommend, nor is it something I’d read again.
The ONLY reason that this book has two stars is because it’s short and somewhat funny. Beyond that, I genuinely didn’t enjoy it.
The writing was alright, but often awkward. This book is chock-full of phrases and instances where Michael seems to prove he’s “A Nerd”. From Michael tripping over himself, speaking in gibberish, and having some very odd narrative thoughts about How Different He Is, way too much was done to make this attractive, rich white man seem socially inept.
It was uncomfortable to read because it was so, SO overdone, and I didn’t enjoy it. Two examples that stuck out to me the most are under spoilers:
Spoiler
“Did I forget to mention I’m that guy? Totally uncoordinated. Socially inept. Supergeek. Walking cliché. The kind of “character” people see on TV shows and call “unrealistic.””
““Har har nice Geneva home not like.”
Kill me now. That was supposed to be me chuckling suavely and saying that Geneva is nice but not like home, but instead I sound like a demented Yoda.”
Beyond that, the plot moves quickly, though fairly well-paced for a story of its length. I enjoyed how Michael and James came together, and the way it was revealed that Michael hadn’t been the only one with a crush. The plot revolving around their family is fun and wholesome, which was enjoyable to read if not very impactful.
I found the ending a bit strange, and the reveal about James… very unnecessary and handled oddly. Still, the book did end on a happy note, which is something I, personally, always like to see.
Overall, this was a fast, easy read that was hindered by its attempt at being different. It isn’t one I’d recommend, nor is it something I’d read again.