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A review by melissasbookshelf
The Crowns of Croswald by D.E. Night

3.0

The Crowns of Croswald is a fun fantasy series for middle grade readers. It is quite similar to Harry Potter in many aspects, yet it has its own unique world and brand of magic. Like Harry Potter, Ivy is a young woman who has grown up in humble circumstances. She is treated poorly at the Castle Plum where she works as a scaldrony maid who cares for the dragons that heat the ovens of the castle. When she receives a mysterious invitation to attend a magical school, the Halls of Ivy, she begins a fantastical journey of discovering more about her true origins, meeting loyal friends, and encountering bullies, as well as a nasty villain.

Though the general story arc has similarities to Harry Potter, there are also differences that make it unique. First, the magical system is different. Royalty uses stones in crowns to make magic and then there are the scriveners who work for the royal families and use their quills to create magic. There are all sorts of magical creatures who live in this world, like haries (fairy like creatures who basically live in lanterns and provide the light). There are also some unusual locations like the Hollow Shaft that appears out of the water and disappears almost as quickly, as well as worlds within bottles called glanageries. There is a school master called the Selector who is a sort of Dumbledore figure, but is much more mysterious and it’s unclear whose side she is on. There is also an evil Queen who is followed around by her evil minions called the Cloaked Brood.

As a reader, this magical world was somewhat confusing. I felt like I was plunged into the world without much explanation. I think including a map of the world and also a glossary at the back containing information on the magic, money system, food, characters, etc. would have been extremely helpful.

There was plenty of action in this story and uses of magic. The one problem that I kept having was seeing a connection between events. It seemed a little disjointed and I wanted a bit more of an explanation for what was happening before being plunged into something else. It was because of this that it took me awhile to get into the book. I feel like if I read it a second time, I would find it more enjoyable because then I would better understand the world and see the connections knowing what’s coming.

I really enjoyed the side characters. I liked Fyn and Rebecca especially and I wished that they were explored more than they were. Unfortunately, I had a difficult time liking the main character Ivy. She seemed too self absorbed and cared little about how her actions affected her friends and other people. For instance, her friend Rebecca gets stuck in this forgotten room. Ivy knows where she is, but does little to try to rescue her from the situation. She involves Fyn in a scheme when leaving the school only to put him in grave danger with little thought to him. Hopefully, she becomes more likable and her character develops more in the next books.

All in all, I liked this book. I think Harry Potter fans who love the story and enjoy characters with a somewhat similar arc will enjoy this book. I recognize that I’m not the target audience for this book, but I think middle grade readers will like the magical world. This would be a good adventure to introduce them to the fantasy genre. I wavered between 3 and 4 stars, but ultimately went with three because of the issues previously discussed. I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author and NetGalley for my honest review. All opinions are my own and I was not required to give a positive review.