A review by coffeeandink
Demon Moon by Meljean Brook

3.0

POC heroine (half-white, half-(East) Indian). Prose good sentence by sentence but needs line-editing for repetition on the paragraph level; author needs to be less heavy-handed on interpreting character for readers, better at conveying background, past, relationships. Indian background not entirely convincing, but then neither was the heroine as survivor of traumatic murders of family, nor her adoptive sibling relationship with another character. Sexually experienced heroine, no apologies, good; decent banter. Exceptionally detailed fantasy world-building for romance.

Promising, flawed.