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When it Raynes by Montana Fyre
4.0
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated

"I will kill anyone that hurts you, and I will burn the whole fucking world to the ground if it means keeping you safe."

“Because you’re mine, and I don’t take kindly to people touching what doesn’t belong to them.”

Whew! Give me possessive men who will burn the world down for the ones they love any day!! From the start, I was head over heels in love with Rayne. I couldn't understand why Emerson couldn't get over herself and just jumped him. I mean, come on. He did everything for her and protected her. I actually didn't like her fake independence thing. She thought that accepting Rayne and his family meant she was giving up herself. It made no sense, especially with how supportive and amazing her dad was. On top of that, i don't feel that she even had a personality other than assuming things and completely stupid. She made decisions that didn't make sense. 

I did love her fight and drive for the Center. That made her bearable! But I prefer all the other characters in the book before her. Rayne, wynter, storm, snow, her dad, etc love them all! They are great. And that last sentence devastated me!!!! I hate it for Rayne and the rest of them! I'm so ready for Rayne and the siblings to get revenge on the Russos! Please destroy them! Begging for this! 

The only reason this book isn't a 5 star read for me is because of Emerson. She was a two-dimensional doll. There wasn't anything compelling about her except for the Center. And when she was talking to Rayne she had me rolling my eyes. The amount of ASSumptions she made pissed me off. No explaining just ASSuming she knew better 🙄 ugh ok enough of her! The rest of the book was amazing!