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Cale by Victoria Ashley
2.0

In terms of erotica, this is a clear 4 stars or higher. However, story wise, I wasn't quite content with some of the dialogue, some ways things were executed throughout the book. Thankfully it was short so I kept reading. Usually I love virgin hero characters, but the way it all came out was had a super weird feel. It didn't feel believable I guess I'm saying, especially when it came out about her waiting for him also. I'm not saying it COUDLNT happen, but the way it was written and how it conveniently was all accepted just didn't feel right. She sees him and assumes he sleeps around, even more so when she finds out his a stripper, but doesn't doubt at all that he hasn't? Nope, not buying it. I thought there would be a bit of drama but it only involved the ex. I also don't think the scenes involving the boss were needed at all, they didn't even scream alpha male and jealousy when Cale got angry. It just felt a little flat I guess. Ah well.