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A review by cebun
Heart of a Monster by Shain Rose
3.0
Hmm. Where to start.
I didn’t like the writing style that much, because for example, very often there was an intense scene going on, and the next chapter it just tells us how it ends. You’re in the present, living in the scene, feeling its intensity in the middle of it and then bam, next chapter it just tells you how it ends. It feels a lot like telling, instead of showing. It was confusing, present and then it jumps to narrating in past tense. Nah. Not cool.
The story gets dragged on with this stupid thing that the female MC is indecisive between two men. That was nasty. She was sleeping with one, and kissing the other repeatedly. That was stupid.
And the story would have been the same without this stupid part. It’s a filler.
What’s more interesting happens at the end. And of course, the story is dragged just so it can be a second book.
I don’t know why people don’t just write one good book, instead of two medium.
I didn’t like the writing style that much, because for example, very often there was an intense scene going on, and the next chapter it just tells us how it ends. You’re in the present, living in the scene, feeling its intensity in the middle of it and then bam, next chapter it just tells you how it ends. It feels a lot like telling, instead of showing. It was confusing, present and then it jumps to narrating in past tense. Nah. Not cool.
The story gets dragged on with this stupid thing that the female MC is indecisive between two men. That was nasty. She was sleeping with one, and kissing the other repeatedly. That was stupid.
And the story would have been the same without this stupid part. It’s a filler.
What’s more interesting happens at the end. And of course, the story is dragged just so it can be a second book.
I don’t know why people don’t just write one good book, instead of two medium.