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3.0

I liked her previous work Milk & Honey but didn’t love this one. I liked the part about immigrant parents so that’s why I rated it 3 stars. 

I’m not a literary critic but I wasn’t a fan of the actual writing - all lowercase, no punctuation, and broken sentences that didn’t feel like they had a real reason to be set up that way. It still conveys the message so it works but just not my preference.