A review by postcordillera
Brody's Hope by Elise Whyles

2.0

Decent start but it's like the editing stopped midway through. The formatting became messy in epub (with the page number, title of the book, and the author's other pen name showing up on the middle of every other page) +, the characters started acting in unexpected ways that were hard to accept because there wasn't foreshadowing or the groundwork put down for a major shift in the dynamic. Would benefit from structural edits and removing repetitive dialogue.