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The Lover by Silvia Moreno-Garcia
2.0

I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own. Thank you NetGalley and Amazon Original Stories for this advanced copy.

The Lover by Silvia Moreno-Garcia had so much potential!  A magical Little Red Riding Hood retelling … yes, please!!  However, as a short story, it did not do anything for me.  

I found myself frustrated in the beginning as things the pace and scenarios were moving so rapidly it almost didn’t make sense.  A certain phrase was repeated several times and it took me a minute to realize the repetition was done intentionally and not by mistake.  I mean, I should have realized that, but with ARCs sometimes the reader DOES catch errors like that. Towards the end of the story, I knew what was going to happen, but then the story just ended.  Poof!  Just like that!  The ending felt very abrupt and the entire plot line felt way too rushed and thrown together.  It only took me about 1.5 hours to read, but I think so much more could have been done with this story as a full length novel instead of a short story.