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The Forgotten Stone by E.A. Winters
3.5
adventurous slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

It's got a lot of errors, unnecessary exposition and dialogue that doesn't contribute to the plot, and a lot of anachronistic language. It starts with some pretty impressive world building, but by the middle, it's obviously a Christian allegory and a bit heavy handed. Still, I'd like to see more of the world building, and maybe unrelated stories about the interesting cultural groups the author created. I included a minor CW of lesbophobia due to one line, but I think the author didn't intend it that way; the wording she used to describe a certain character could have been better. 

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